1, Into WAY TO LONG shorten it loads please
2. animation to slow placed. better frame rate needed.
3. didn't keep me interested.
4. Music needed, scary music will give it a huge improvement at the beginning, and your theme, was way to short,
animation took ages to progress into somthing
story plot. yeh great u tried, just improve on background sound, effects, and lazy things as backgroud colours, make it darker, message me and i can help you alot if you want?
You know I calculated a way to get every sumission I create no matter how bad thru the newgrounds portal?
front page here we come!
nice work man, very smooth animaition i loved it!
Front page for sure!
nice man :D
Well done on your first flash! i liked the credits at the end, made me watch them all lol, The story was ace, the voices annoyed me but i think it was great, maybe more music next time? or a bit louder? dunno but it was great!
i look forward to seeing your next flash at christmas. Good luck!
Glad you liked it. With the lack of voice actors around I pretty much had to do it myself.
Oh, except my girlfriend did the dinner call and her little sister screamed for me. =)
As for the music I put it all at a little over 1/2 loudness. Mostly because my speakers SUCK so I can't tell how it's going to act on everyone else's.
Thanks for checking it out!
that was alright, wouldn't play it again, was annoying at times cus my hand froze up from holding the mouse, nice idea, maybe a bit more veriaty? levels of mode?
Hmmm lvl 13 is hard?
I mean everyone is saying lvl 13 is hard... i found it so easy all u have to do is wait till u can make the knight ,,, just kill a few peons first lol! :P anyway lvl 15 here i come! :P
Hey dude, i love ur work, Maybe we can chat some time, i really want to get into this but i need some help, i have added some of the emails in the contacts page on ur website, hopefully one of them is u and i can talk to u for a bit, i need ur help :)
Hey dude i really liked it its very good loop...
How do u make the Music i mean what programs do u use? as i conpose in sibalious but its Midi not Mp3 do u use somthing like cubase?
I really would appressiate an answer thanks alot
I´m glad ya liked the loop, and I hope ya checked out the full version too.
I use Reason and sometimes Cubase a little for making music. An sometimes a guitar too...
I really appreciate your review! :D
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