needs improvement

1, Into WAY TO LONG shorten it loads please

2. animation to slow placed. better frame rate needed.

3. didn't keep me interested.

4. Music needed, scary music will give it a huge improvement at the beginning, and your theme, was way to short,

animation took ages to progress into somthing

story plot. yeh great u tried, just improve on background sound, effects, and lazy things as backgroud colours, make it darker, message me and i can help you alot if you want?

- Coxeh

nice man :D

Well done on your first flash! i liked the credits at the end, made me watch them all lol, The story was ace, the voices annoyed me but i think it was great, maybe more music next time? or a bit louder? dunno but it was great!
i look forward to seeing your next flash at christmas. Good luck!

Coxeh

hehe

score... 375535
that was alright, wouldn't play it again, was annoying at times cus my hand froze up from holding the mouse, nice idea, maybe a bit more veriaty? levels of mode?

etc

Coxeh

Hmmm lvl 13 is hard?

I mean everyone is saying lvl 13 is hard... i found it so easy all u have to do is wait till u can make the knight ,,, just kill a few peons first lol! :P anyway lvl 15 here i come! :P

CoXeH

Its good

Hey dude, i love ur work, Maybe we can chat some time, i really want to get into this but i need some help, i have added some of the emails in the contacts page on ur website, hopefully one of them is u and i can talk to u for a bit, i need ur help :)
Coxeh

nice

Hey dude i really liked it its very good loop...

How do u make the Music i mean what programs do u use? as i conpose in sibalious but its Midi not Mp3 do u use somthing like cubase?

I really would appressiate an answer thanks alot

Coxeh